Once Upon...

The day I met him I was hot as hell

and he was the water I needed

His smile erased my anger

his words soothing to my wounded heart.

He left his number for me to call

I debated back and forth

My memory replayed his smile

his laughter rang high

like bells on Sunday morning

I rang his phone and to my surprise

he answered and knew it was I

he had been waiting

He knew I would call, he felt it inside

We talked for hours every chance we had

talking to him was like a cool shower

on a hot summer’s day

We touched each other to only tease

as he waited patiently

My heart needed to heal

before I jumped into his river

In time I was whole again and ready

to be loved completely

as the earth is round

True love I finally found

Reviews

[Unique_ Renee]

This poem is sweet and caring. it truely shows the power of true love like day and night, neither are complete without each other. The comparison of hot and wet shows how powerful the love between these two people are! The imagery used creates a passion within the reader that makes your poem truely unique.
A* from me =D