Our Little Ray of Sun

In memory of my beautiful little girl 'Lotte.'

I remember the day I first saw your eyes,

peering out in wondered surprise, 

you a mere six weeks of age

  looked so tiny in that cage. 

A plane flight to life anew,

our lives weaving around 

  the beautiful you.

 

Only weeks old you caught on, 

my little companion you'd become

draped over a wheelchair wheel

  as if your duty to me you knew, 

your eyes saying, 

   "I'm minding my daddy's car", 

the most endearing photo by far. 

 

You very soon made your mark 

  as you won so many hearts,

you our little ray of sun,

showering love on everyone.

You were the sparkle to everyday,

always bringing a smile our way. 

 

You never liked baths, 

running to me for protection, 

for solace, pleading

  for some intervention.

how you really quite 

  liked being immersed, 

many things could be far worse. 

 

Remembering how you loved

  your walks. 

hovering at her bedroom door,

What shoes today would hit the floor? 

So excited to see a green lead, 

'Do you want to go?', you'd happily agree. 

 

The gate bell attached to you, 

someone visiting and everyone knew, but 

  when they entered you were sweet, 

dropping 'Rabbo' at our feet. 

just wanting to be recognised,

loved more, never chastised. 

 

On my knee you could 

  see over the wall, 

people, dogs you saw it all, 

I remember your skiddly boots 

  around the house, 

no such thing as 'quiet as a mouse.' 

  or you'd come running when we'd sneeze, 

staring as if it hurt your ears?

 

Very attentive to your job, 

barking at the passing mob, 

people with dogs on leads

  would get you into a frenzy. 

Always 'talking' at the gate, 

neighbours, I'm sure, were irate. 

 

Will never forget my

  hospital stay and 

  times beside me you happily lay, 

a hospital bed a crocheted rug, 

your one position warm and snug.

The time I had to spend away, 

our hearts to see each other again,

you so excited to see my face, 

on my lap in the sun you 

  took your place. 

 

When I came home and 

  people appeared, 

you had to check them out, agree. 

you just wanted to be a part, 

so uplifting to my heart, 

you to see what's going on, 

hoping you didn't get trod on, 

always getting in the way, but 

  so beautiful that you'd stay. 

 

Months went by you 

  couldn't stay 

it broke our hearts when 

  you went away, but 

  beautiful memories

  surround us by the day. 

 

Reviews

[redd Brick Keshner]

This is really sad. The number of pets we've lost has stopped us from having any, it's just too painful. We pet sit instead. Thanks for sharing.

[Lisasview]

Losing a pet is so difficult...
Love that you added the photo,,,your words were so lovely as well.
Thank you for sharing,
Lisa, now in Spain

[Richard M]

Thank you Lisa for reading. Lotte was just the sweetest always, esp when I was in hospital and at in recovery. Just the dearest, sweetest little 'person dog.' Remembered every day.

[Gee]

The death of a family pet is as bad if not worse than that of a loved one.
This is a piece that tugs at the heartstrings with a lovely pic to accompany.
Hope Sunday finds you well Richard

[Richard M]

Thank you Gee for reading and glad you liked it Yes, well thank you, and hope you are too?
Take care
Richard

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was heartbreaking but also so uplifting. It reminded me of Shakespeare's words, It's better to have loved and lost than never to have loved...." Our furry friends can be just like family. I know I've had and lost a few that felt just that way to me. Your tribute was precious and touching. I enjoyed your write. Bless. F.

[Richard M]

Thank you for reading

[Fabian G. Franklin]

My pleasure.

[...Relic...]

A dog is the most cherished companion a person can have. When they die, the loss is no different then any other family member. I've felt this loss in the past. It's not easy to get over. I feel your loss in this poem. May you be well, Richard.

[Richard M]

Thank you Relic for reading. It's been a year, but she's at peace, no longer in pain and discomfort. Lotte was my last, as our lives have changed. Another dog poem on the way.
Hope you're well my friend?
Richard

[John the Baptist]

Beautiful tribute to a beloved companion. I know I will feel just as devastated when our two aging cats pass on.

[Richard M]

Thank so much for reading John.

[Melinda McQueen]

Awwwww what a precious tribute to your friend.

[Richard M]

Thank you Melinda for reading. Hard to write, the memories :) Thank you my friend.

[Cherrie]

Very touching poem 💙 pets are truly a part of the family and when we lose them ( or they us) the loss is deeply felt.

[Richard M]

Thank you for your review Cherrie.

[Cherrie]

Good morning Richard and your welcome hope you and your family is doing well.

[Richard M]

We are well, thank you Cherrie. A belated Happy New Year to you and yours.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Richard, I am so touched by this write about the loss of your beloved pet. Your stanzas are heartfelt, tender and beautiful. I know you have many happy memories but also know your heart is breaking. Hope you are keeping well dear friend. Take care.

Chris

[Richard M]

Thank you Chris for reviewing my latest piece. Much appreciated! It's easy to write something that's so deep. Lotte was a Maltese cross, but had a big personality, but beautiful memories. I am keeping well my friend, hope you too? Thank you again.
Richard