Words Unspoken

Words unspoken

Lies unfoling

Carried by the the weight of time

She stands in the rain hoping for what she can't find

She waits in the fall preparing herself, giving her all

She sits in her room waiting for the tears to start rolling from her soul

She wants more but never getting satisfied

She can't think of any reasons to not be happy

But the memories flood back

Tears ingolf her

Wanting only good memories she then

Slices off what's not needed

She cuts

Now it's bleeding

She sits and waits for time to roll

It's now 9 and ive passed out 10

She says she'll be out in a min

Light a candle to fade to smell of blood

She drains the water and walks out

Never looking back

Not wanting to see her past

Reviews

[Resa]

Wow Dess!
This was really intense.
And sad.
But what an awesome read!
I read it three times just to really take it in.
I started this out by calling you Dess.
I’m not usually one to


familiarize like that 🙁
It just wrote out for some reason. Sorry

[Desiree O'Neal]

aww thank you so much, it means a lot that you even read my work and i'm happy to have a little nickname. I haven't really had one in a really time. I love dess :)

[Ghost47]

Just reading the poem, I feel the sadness of it. Wanting to forget the past is something we feel often, and what you wrote really connected. And the last line, simply beautiful

[Desiree O'Neal]

Thank you for reading my work, and I tend to write my emotions out a lot.

[mou]

those unspoken words remain there forever..a very private picture of an usual life gets a beautiful paper with your ink and strong words..love it
mou.

[Anjali]

it's really good! i really liked it... it holds the bittersweet truth in it which i admire a lot... the way you put all the words together.. beautiful.
"Light a candle to fade to smell of blood"
this is my favourite line, i loved it!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Life can be a burden to bare. If we could remember to measure it by the way we handle the hard times instead of thinking that the hardship itself defines us

You have a true gift

[Evelynn]

This was sooo good! You're really good at expressing your emotions :)

[repituugjng]

This poem put me in my feelings, as people say nowadays. I felt your emotion and wow, it really took a toll on me. Great job.

[Desiree O'Neal]

Thank you, I always try to always put my feelings into my work.