Unsaid

It's the things left unsaid

It's the things that went unnoticed

It's those things that will make you fall

It's these things that will make you give your all

Its somethings that will make your day

yet it can just fade away

It's a good feeling when your with her

But at the end of the day you will be ruined by greed

You can match it together to make a whole

But when you get too far apart it can shred your soul

You have to hold her close or it will take a toul

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

A good thing to remember in these cases If a man needs a reward in the end for things he should do by conscience Then there is something wrong. Kindness is its own reward.

[Inanna]

I really enjoyed reading your poem :-)

[Desiree O'Neal]

Thank you for reading it. :)

[Inanna]

Your welcome

[Resa]

I haven’t read a piece by you that I have not loved!
This is another one!
👍

[Desiree O'Neal]

Thank you so much that means a lot coming from you because all of your writing is always wonderful, thank you for commenting.

[lessa (kenzie)]

so full of emotions, well written and expressed

[Anjali]

Your writings are really good. The rhyming is very good. And I just loved the emotions in it.

[Desiree O'Neal]

Thanks for your feedback, I really appreciate it.

[Anjali]

You're very welcome!

[KCthelastboyscout]

I always said sometimes it's the things that are not said that breaks a relationship. Well done with your writing. Very touching statement

[Desiree O'Neal]

Thanks for your comment and yeah I agree with you, it is the things that go unsaid that will break a relationship.