Po-Emm

I included a preview of an animation, for your entertainment. The poem is not anything serious.

Doddsy DDC6 Tribute Preview - Made in Pivot, enhanced with Flash.

 

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Po-Emm

Up in North Maine

There lived an old man

His name was Po-Emm, and he loved to sing.

Down in South Maine

There lived a young boy

His name was Storr-Ree, and he loved to read.

Left in Left Maine

There lived a prime man

His name was Chap-Terr, and he loved to eat.

Right in the Atlantic

There lived a fish

And one day, Po-Emm took that fish out for a walk.

Now young Storr,

He loved that ol' fish.

He jumped out of his sandbox

Took out a small shovel

And said:

"MY FISH."

Author's Note

Do not grade this too harshly, I normally write much better poems.
And please don't say something like "Stfu, you can't put animations."
Thank you.

Reviews

[Jessica R.]

This poem has an interesting perspective. It's different from most poems that I have read, and that's a good change. It was rather fun to read-- I like it.

[Andrea N]

It's good. You should not care what other people think as everyone has different perceptions and cannot get inside your head to experience your thoughts and ideas for your writing... to get the same perception as you.
So f**k yeah and write on. ;) bwahaha

[..R.I.P..]

This was funny and really enjoyable to read. You should post some other poems.

[talulu love]

good job its really good