A Red Mist Descends

A Red Mist Descends

A Poem by Sel Whiteley
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One of my first poems.

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This sepia still of Tibet, 1959,
would be consistent
with the Tibet of a millennia past.

A father, his complexion pale
and delicate as the flakes
caught in tonight's stormy moondrifts,
mounts his horse.
He gazes to a mountainscape
of alpine flowers.

The horse gallops.
His little girl is left to scud snow,
her sable silk hair ruffled
by a breeze pregnant with  salts
drifted 10,000 years before.

A cinnamon-clothed priest
still in azure meditative calm,
stares at the temple's brazen bells,
and toys with a bead
that reads Anissa.

A shaven-haired, pubescent pupil
averts his green gaze
from the candlelight-roused
chiselled Buddha to the well-thumbed,
still prayer wheel.

Over the nighttime landscape
that lays as defined as a lacquered box,
a red mist descends.

© 2011 Sel Whiteley


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Very nice description! I especially like the "cinnamon-clothed priest" and the prayer wheel image. Is the red mist symbolic of anything?

Posted 13 Years Ago


poetry was in your soul a long time for this to happen early on...yours is a delicate hand

Posted 13 Years Ago


Your use of appropriate words is impressive.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is beautiful, your descriptions illicit beautiful timeless images. Most excellent.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Sel Whiteley
Sel Whiteley

Toulouse, France



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