Word Of The Wise

Walls closing around me,
My every breath being taken,
The lights go out,
The room gets smaller as my soul is sucked from my hallow shell,
It was as if...
The reaper  himself had found me slowly reached down my throat and pulled my soul from with in me,
The agony lasted only but a few hours,
But the memory of each painful second last FOREVER,
So be careful what you say,
For it may cause eternal pain

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

Ohh...yes! That yanking out of the soul can be a b***h. It's really bad when the reeper goes for someone whos got a bad gag reflex...all this spirit mucus comes fling out, gums up his freshly laundered robe. ;p

Awesome visual you've painted! Much enjoyed to descent into hells abyss. =)

Aaron

[NovaeSpes]

haha, Your review made my day!

[Sami Khalil]

"The agony lasted only but a few hours,
But the memory of each painful second last FOREVER,"

Once bitten , twice shy...A splendid read and write...:)..........................

[Electric Scribe]

This is insightful and beautiful. It serves as a reminder of how much impact words can have. Kind words inspire, motivate, and help create. Cruel words can destroy the very essence of ones being, causing pain, and spawning reactions and behaviors vary out of character for even the most kind and beautiful spirit. Thank you for sharing it, I pray that you my never again feel that way. Sending love and good vibes your way. =)

[BrandonTheEnigma]

Very deep and heartfelt. I know your writing comes from your own personal feelings and I enjoy your writing alot Koda

[NovaeSpes]

I enjoy yours too I miss you hope to talk to you soon My dear enigma :) -dod-

[B-poet]

Very deep and emphatic, I like a lot of aspects of the dark side in terms of emotional and maybe spiritual turmoil. Great write. :) I have a few poems like that, if you have time you should check some of my stuff. Great poem again.

[NovaeSpes]

Thanks for the review and your poems are VERY breathtaking and hope you post more...

[Sarah Greaton]

Love it, it's so simple yet also complex and it's straight forward to the point, I can feel your passion for poetry while reading it. Well done, fabulous job.