A Question With No Answer

"Summer days have gone and past,

At last winter is coming

Now it's here,

The white crystals fall from the sky,

Your breath hits the air,

I see it and wounder,

How it is our world came to be?

Please someone tell me,

Our world full of wonder,

Our world full of hate,

Tell me how we came to be this way,

Our minds wonder and think,

But do we really try and think it out?

Please someone help me figure it out."

Reviews

[Warren L.G De Mills]

Interesting poem. The questions asked are questions that have existed for a long time and the answers depend on your own personal philosophy on life. Personally, I believe in God and so I believe that he created the world. I also believe in the bible which talks about sin so I believe thats where"Our world full of hate" is derived.

[Richard🖌]

This is a very good poem, I think, Dear Lady Poet 👍

I say this because it's excellently written and presented in such an intelligent way in Free Verse form that flows from line-to-line, from thought-to-thought, and from question-to-question with spot-on linebreaks … the hand of a skilled poetess.
There have always been more questions than answers for thousands of years, and no one, not even the world's greatest minds, have ever been able to discover the TRUTHFUL answers to all the world's most simple, sought after, impacting questions.

How eloquently and concisely you pose them … yes, I think the question have really been thought out and been tried to be answered, but unfortunately I don't believe there's anyone who can help you figure it out, but in the sincere ways you ask, I sure wish I could.

Beautifully rendered, Dear Poetess, with perfect introductory artwork, too!
Thank you ever-so warmly fro sharing! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Sarah Greaton]

HAhahahahahhahaha I rememberwhen you wrote this, I was there!

[Sarah Greaton]

Thats my best frien for ya! Amazing Write buddy!

[Sarah Greaton]

Epicness, Really good write I liked it a lot.

[Allen Smuckler]

A good write SP1...I think you hit the nail on the head
"Our world full of wonder"
"our world full of hate"
It's whichever path you chose to follow...that of wonder or the one filled with hate. I chose the one with wonder, love and kindness" and leave the other behind.
We can only try to live a good life and try to see and find our part in this mystery called life. Try to find the positive or at least the possibilities...
allen
It's a life long process...Good luck

[Leslie Philibert]

Good poem with some super lines, your breath hits the air is a jaw-dropper.Great.

[Hotwater]

It'll do for me, funny how you see something and it leads the mind to search for almost unanswerable questions. Good work here.
*bird*

[Boldpen]

It was a wonderful read. Nicely written. Flawless. Expressions were fantastic and the fact that this poem asks reader to think about something is what makes it extremely delightful read. Good work.