Field Of Laughter

Field Of Laughter

A Poem by NovaeSpes
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One of my best memories..

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True Bliss,
Water lightly flows in front of me,
Fields of green surround me,
The Birds sweet melodies flood the air,
Children laughing,
"Tag your it!" they giggle
"Koda come play!" they chant,
They shriek in joy as the imaginary creature pursues them,
"Can't catch me!"
"Can't catch me!" they sing,
Serenity at last.

© 2015 NovaeSpes


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this is so light and endearing. it deeply reminds me of that feeling in childhood that gets lost as we grow, the feeling that only the moment matters and we are they way we see the world...dust swirls in light and its magic, trees grow like columns of heaven and we laugh and cry and find happiness in the simplest of pleasures :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NovaeSpes

9 Years Ago

I utterly adore this comment, This has made my day. Thank you so very much!



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Childhood memories rarely go away if they were as blissful as this. You describe heaven on earth. The joy in your words cannot be ignored. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NovaeSpes

8 Years Ago

This is one of my most cherished memories from when I was younger, so many bad things were happening.. read more
I love these little flashback/slice of life pieces.
So true and honest. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is so light and endearing. it deeply reminds me of that feeling in childhood that gets lost as we grow, the feeling that only the moment matters and we are they way we see the world...dust swirls in light and its magic, trees grow like columns of heaven and we laugh and cry and find happiness in the simplest of pleasures :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NovaeSpes

9 Years Ago

I utterly adore this comment, This has made my day. Thank you so very much!
Such a calming and peaceful piece! I really enjoyed reading this and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


NovaeSpes

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :)

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Added on March 6, 2015
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Tags: Brothers, Sisters, Field, laughter, memories, birds, children, monster, tag, sing, bliss, serenity

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