My Love

Your smile leaves me breathless,
Your eyes leave me in a daze,
To call you Mine sends electricity through me,
When I hold you close...
I forget about any dreadful thing that has ever crossed me,
The feel of your soft lips brushing my cheek leaves me in amazement,
I wouldn't know where to begin if you asked why I love you,
I couldn't find the words to describe how much I care for you,
You not only saved my heart from crashing,
You showed me the true meaning of happiness,
Your the ever lasting glow in my smile,
You are the dream I think of over and over.

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Author's Note

Please tell me what you think...n_n

Reviews

[B-poet]

I love the intriguing message that's being expressed here. Cherishing what makes that special someone so special. Love can bring the best out of anyone as long as it's genuine and the attraction to the other person is mutual. Great job. The emotional deepth of gratitude for being in love is illustrated brillantly as well. :)

[NovaeSpes]

Thank You For Your Reviews They Always Help n_n

[Talal Hussain]

great composition..good selection of words..nice job :-)

[NovaeSpes]

Hehe Thank you n_n