The Fire In Her Mind

Tears of blood

Flow from the eyes

Of a Fallen Angel

 

The first angel

To fall from heaven above

And land in hell below

 

Her delicate features battered

Her soft downy wings

Badly broken and bleeding

 

Her sobbing

Shatters my heart

As her tears crash around me

Erupting like thousands of volcanoes

 

Her mind fills with malice and hate

For the god she once revered

Who banished her from eternal happiness

And literally threw her

Into darkness and despair

 

Her features begin to change

Her beautiful white eyes

Charred black from the fire in her mind

 

Angelic wings

Once white and soft

Are now black and leathery

 

Her mind corrupted

With thoughts of hate and revenge

Twisting with visions of his demise

 

The first angel

To fall from heaven above

And land in hell below

 

So with bloodstained clothes

And clenched fists

She falls to her knees

Looks to the heavens

And SCREAMS!

Reviews

[DESTROYA]

Amazing! the imagery brings me to another world. the story-telling was done perfectly!