Farragos of illusion by artistic depression

Farragos of illusion by artistic depression

A Poem by Fréyjä Helvití

Frolicsome creatures upon grassy meadows
Creepish forlorn dead trees that bellows
Beyond the threshold and yonder the glen
Lies Elysian mysteries of time knows when

The illusive breeze of that bloodless May
Of raining twigs and prickling spray
Scars beneath my naked toes
To where I am, nobody knows

Blanched gore as Crimson wine
Underneath dampen gallows we dine
Clamoring rancid silver spoons
Of rampant riches that fade too soon

Nightmarish fantasies of dis figuration
Define me visions of my damnation
Hallucinations dived in melodies
Oh the dread that screams my symphonies

Juvenile harlequins and freakish jesters
Wicked suitors nor erotic splendors
Trappings of this carnal doom
Beneath scorched iron and dungeons gloom

Abyssal pits breathe hopeless cries
They pray for my own souls demise
Lessons that were never learned
Do you see me now? Do you see me burn?

Thundering fears, the deafening silence
Demented tortures, the emerging defiance
Chained amidst the beseeching light
Eternal absence at the dead of night

Ashes breath of fogs that loom
A forsaken bride, the remorseless groom
Denied to her twas one last chance
To take his groom for one last dance

Farragoes of my vast illusions
Memories confused far more delusions
If only I had learned to die
I wouldn't have taught myself to cry...

© 2013 Fréyjä Helvití


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F*****g Beautifull!!!!!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully dark and powerful

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much...
"Ashes breath of fogs that loom
A forsaken bride, the remorseless groom
Denied to her twas one last chance
To take his groom for one last dance

Farragoes of my vast illusions
Memories confused far more delusions
If only I had learned to die
I wouldn't have taught myself to cry..."~ This dark and cryptic piece is magnificently written!...I loved the rhythmic flow that you have crafted so cleverly within this piece. Excellent work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much... :)
Like the good rhymes and the rich language, good one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

Thank you..
beautifully written

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

Thank you... :)
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Trurly inspiring and descriptive poem! Well written! 100/100 :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

Thank you... :)
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12 Years Ago

you're welcome! :)
A breathtaking write of the darkness inside. Most wonderful!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

Thanks Melody.. :)
This is amazing, I wish you the best of luck :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much...
Speak in Silence

12 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Haunting, grave, and sorrowful-- darkness defined in its beauty... how delightfully wicked of you, luv ;]

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

It is my pleasure to please you readers... Thank you so much.. :)
I'm very impressed, I love immagery and you seem to have mastered it. Beautifully written in a way that captures the reader and it made me feel... I dont even know how to describe it. Very powerful, keep up the good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much...
Sam Gregory

12 Years Ago

No problem

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Added on June 6, 2012
Last Updated on March 30, 2013
Tags: Darkness, Gothic

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Fréyjä Helvití
Fréyjä Helvití

Rivendell, Middle Earth, Philippines



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