Frolicsome creatures upon grassy meadows Creepish forlorn dead trees
that bellows Beyond the threshold and yonder the glen Lies Elysian
mysteries of time knows when
The illusive breeze of that
bloodless May Of raining twigs and prickling spray Scars beneath
my naked toes To where I am, nobody knows
Blanched gore as
Crimson wine Underneath dampen gallows we dine Clamoring rancid
silver spoons Of rampant riches that fade too soon
Nightmarish
fantasies of dis figuration Define me visions of my damnation Hallucinations
dived in melodies Oh the dread that screams my symphonies
Juvenile
harlequins and freakish jesters Wicked suitors nor erotic splendors Trappings
of this carnal doom Beneath scorched iron and dungeons gloom
Abyssal
pits breathe hopeless cries They pray for my own souls demise Lessons
that were never learned Do you see me now? Do you see me burn?
Thundering
fears, the deafening silence Demented tortures, the emerging
defiance Chained amidst the beseeching light Eternal absence at
the dead of night
Ashes breath of fogs that loom A forsaken
bride, the remorseless groom Denied to her twas one last chance To
take his groom for one last dance
Farragoes of my vast illusions Memories
confused far more delusions If only I had learned to die I wouldn't have taught myself to cry...
Damn L.V.!!!!!! I'm truly impressed!!! Your vocab is off the chain!!! You are a well skilled writer. HARLEQUINS. WTF IS THAT!?!? I had to look that s**t up,haha. I definitely do not want you reading my work. It's childrens nursery rhymes compared to your work. I am intimidated by your work....F**k you are bad a*s!!!!!!!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I think I'm so supposed to be high or something to come up with this stuff. JK. Well glad you liked .. read moreI think I'm so supposed to be high or something to come up with this stuff. JK. Well glad you liked it. Oh I'm gonna check out your works soon enough. Expecting to read something morbid out of you... Thanks...
11 Years Ago
uum well,if your are religious say your prayers,cuz yea my work can be a little off (evil grin)
11 Years Ago
Yah I'm kinda religious. But when you listen to a lot of Slayer and a lot of death metal, I think it.. read moreYah I'm kinda religious. But when you listen to a lot of Slayer and a lot of death metal, I think it doesn't matter if your works are a little off... LOL.
Slayer? wow I really,really like your style!!!!!! Last month I went skydiving with my SLAYER beanie .. read moreSlayer? wow I really,really like your style!!!!!! Last month I went skydiving with my SLAYER beanie on,it's become my lucky beanie,hahaha
11 Years Ago
Anything with the pentagram maybe lucky for you I assume... LOl. JK
This is such an extravagant collection of images.. haunting and vast... intimate and forlorn... You weave a beautifully bittersweet emotion into every line. A glimpse of the dark hallways I keep hidden within.
Congratulations this poem has been "approved" for publication in...
THE MAGICAL MYTHICAL MYSTERY COMPENDIUM.
-Metaphysical, Mystical & Fantastical Poetry of the Arcane
By John Phoenix Hutchinson and Others. (c) 2012
Please feel free to submit other poems as you are not limited to one entry. Also please write a short "bio" about yourself and send to me via private message. This will be published along with your poem. Thanks J.P.H.
Anyone wanting to make Submissions to this Writers Cafe "e" book Project can do so on my group page, the deadline is 1st of November 2012.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Am glad you added this :)
12 Years Ago
You're welcome sir... Glad to be approved.. Thank you so much.