Divine ecstasy in the Hour of the Apocalypse

Divine ecstasy in the Hour of the Apocalypse

A Poem by Fréyjä Helvití


I behold this day or reckoning
I behold of what’s end
The Armageddon of mortality
The last days of descent

This impending apocalypse
From the horizon it looms
Bring forth my wonderland
And deliver me thy doom

Portals of the underworld
Reveals dark never-never lands
Valleys of endless damnation
Deserts of ceaseless black sands

The hour of divine cataclysm
Now has finally begun
The domination of destruction
The annihilation of the sun

I am now one with the wicked
I am now one with the cursed
And so I laugh at the dying
And so I laughed as I burned

© 2013 Fréyjä Helvití


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that's pretty good. mad disturbing though. especially the ending. feels like lyrics i would see to a dimmu borgir or a braindrill song. but it flowed and rhymed very well. and there was enough imagery to make me think of the surrounds you were describing but it wasn't overwhelming. again well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

well, I was asked by a friend to write down some lyrics for their band. I came up with this...
nigrum homonculus

12 Years Ago

oh i see! you should write some more lyrics. make your own songs even if you don't. i think you'd be.. read more



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Banal.

You're young. For your age group, it's well thought out.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You know, this reminded me of Donnie Darko when he was laughing right before the engine pieces of the airplane crashed upon him...how disturbing :]]

Posted 12 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

lol... Never heard of that movie... Gave me the idea of watching it... Thanks.. :)
L0v3craft

12 Years Ago

Zomg, you NEVER heard of Donnie Darko?!?!?
You'll definitely enjoy it!

And you're.. read more
This eerily sounds a bit like the Lord's prayer, yet much more sinister. Sounds like it could be the narration of some post-apoctolyptic movie trailer. Especially that last line... "And so I laughed as I burned"

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

It's a sort of declaration of the apocalypse... Hailing the rising darkness that will consume the en.. read more
def goes with "braindrill--sadistic abductive" utubed that after the comment below..good call..it works on it's own, but this rules! wanna just read and listen together over and over!!!!
makes me wanna shake hands with chaos and let the best man win...tho I don't necessarily believe in marriage or the authority of such ceremonies, lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

lols... had to utube the song as well... pretty sick... Thanks for the review... :)
The imagery, the emotion, all of it....dark perfection. Very very very well done Vittoria ^_~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

thank you... :)
that's pretty good. mad disturbing though. especially the ending. feels like lyrics i would see to a dimmu borgir or a braindrill song. but it flowed and rhymed very well. and there was enough imagery to make me think of the surrounds you were describing but it wasn't overwhelming. again well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fréyjä Helvití

12 Years Ago

well, I was asked by a friend to write down some lyrics for their band. I came up with this...
nigrum homonculus

12 Years Ago

oh i see! you should write some more lyrics. make your own songs even if you don't. i think you'd be.. read more

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Fréyjä Helvití
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Rivendell, Middle Earth, Philippines



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