Ramblings of a Sarcastic A*****e

 

Here’s to the murders

Of sons without wives!

Cheers to the conclusions

Of their shortened lives!

 

Here’s to the children

Left without their moms!

Cheers to the sorrows

No good man can calm!

 

Here’s to the homeless

Men cold and grubby!

Cheers to the mercy

Of rich getting chubby!

 

Here’s to the women

Beat into submission!

Cheers to the bruises

And those who won’t listen!

 

Here’s to the violence

The wars we justify!

Cheers to the foreign lands

In which our children die!

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

That's the thing about satire. You have to be smart enough (as a reader) to get it. The onus is on the recieving set of eyes. Your delivery was precise - succinct - and steeped in sarcasm. Awesome writing covering so many hot points. Well done. Well done!

[Kaden Sylvers]

weird...

but well written; im not exactly sure what your message is though