A dream of you

A dream of you

A Poem by Soyam
"

It's a dream of mine.

"
I remember a dream..
'nor you there , standing alone, 
I am holding your hand , touch soft touch!
walking down the street , 
we sit down there , having our sweet treat.
you asked , if it is , give me a kiss
I sigh a lot, ' stop ... , I  don't wanna a miss!!!
The silence was awkward , mood finding peace , the only music playing , was our beat(heart beat)
you changed the topic , oh god , you fumbled!
you keep talking , I keep sighing 
you keep your hand , I hold it tight.
came near and kissed you right!
The silence was awkward , redness disguised, the only music hear was our beat at the sight!!!
                                                  

© 2025 Soyam


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Soyam
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Hi! This sounds like a one-sided friendship....you seem to be the one wanting to touch, to kiss and he/she is quite stiff, not seemingly very interested.... though you do mention the sound are the heartbeats... is that from both of you? " the silence was awkward, redness disguised".....maybe both of you are shy, or inexperienced....nice work!!
Warmly, B

Posted 4 Weeks Ago



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Added on January 9, 2025
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