Melancholy Melody of Human

Amidst the tapestry of time's quiet hum,

Echoes the melancholic melody of humanity's song,

A symphony woven with threads of longing,

Notes of sorrow dance in the shadows.

Whispers of dreams unfulfilled, hopes untamed,

Gentle chords of heartache strummed softly,

The rhythm of tears falling like raindrops,

A haunting harmony of struggles embraced.

In the quiet corners of souls, it lingers,

A timeless tune that resonates within,

The sad music of humanity, bittersweet and raw,

A masterpiece painted in shades of empathy.

Reviews

[Lorry]

My first thoughts on this were that these thoughts are like humanities shadow, but they do serve an important purpose, because without melancholy and sorry, how would we know happiness and joy?
Maybe to know the good, we must also have the shadows of bad, no matter what or who we are, we need reminders in our life of the dangers and pain out there, no matter how careful we are.
Your last line sums it up perfectly! 😊

[Soyam]

You are absolutely right...!

Your words reminds me like, " when a child, unconsciously, frequently tries to touch the flame of the candle, not knowing the damage like, they will gonna burn their fingers, that's the reason parents are denying to do so. But lately they didn't stop to. Knowing for the once he/she knows the pain of burning , automatically he/ she will not put their finger in candle again." The same way, sorrow is important to let us understand the value of happiness as you said.

Thanks for sharing your beautiful words with us.

Glad to see you here.

[Betty Hermelee]

WE humans are not always enlightened, joyous, upbeat... Many of us dance in sorrow...longing for something to make us human ,real....our hopes and dreams have not been fulfilled....struggles and a rain of tears falls for what seems like forever...it lingers too long..."the sad music of humanity"....
A beautiful write!
Warmly, B

[emmajoygreen]

How hard it is to live day by day without kindness and the smiling music it offers to those willing to listen.

Although your words are sad, they fluctuate like the rise and fall of a conductor's baton: you truly do know how to make the best of every note you create - such gentle , almost sleepy words, as if trying to make believe. Perhaps?

'.Amidst the tapestry of time's quiet hum,
Echoes the melancholic melody of humanity's song,
A symphony woven with threads of longing,
Notes of sorrow dance in the shadows. '

How sadly true, yet between the lines there seems to be postivie touches Thank you for sharing.. ..

[Chris Shaw]

Gentle, although melancholic. There is always an opposite. Your stanzas here are so very poetic in their description. Really pleasant reading, and the emotion in your chosen words was felt. Thank you for posting Soyam.

Chris

[willweb]

I love all of the musical references in this poem and the overall feel of it. There are many sad and melancholy melodies in people's live but as well, beautiful and exciting melodies if they look past the darkness. Beautifully done my friend.

[Soyam]

Yes, you are absolutely right...! But it's something like, we are so much drown in the sorrow of pain, we cannot able to look the shining rays of hope, because of the darkness of pain , we covered ourselves.

My pleasure you liked it. Thank you very much for giving your valuable time and reviewing it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think humanity is in such sadness at this juncture...that the music could only be composed by Beethoven.
He was the king of sad symphonies.
Chords of heartache, haunted dreams, melancholy melody.
Beautiful poem.
j.

[Soyam]

Beethoven's Fuŕŕ Elise is one of my favorite, what a wonderful creations. The music of mystery and pain. Yes, you are correct. definitely, the point in which humanity stands, the only music of it can be created by Beethoven.
You are right with your every word.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate your kind words.

Thanks for stopping by.