Whispers of Forgiveness: Taming the Tempestuous Heart

Sailing through the Strom of emotions

Amidst tempestuous seas, her heart I broke, 

A lady kind, with passions that did flow, 

Her caring soul, a light, now lost in smoke,

I sail adrift, where darkened waters grow.

No stars to guide, no light to show the way, 

Within her stormy heart, my sins reside, 

Remorseful, lost, I linger and I pray,

For calmer tides to turn this fateful ride.

Upon the sea, I'll wait where sorrows wane, 

In hope forgiveness shines through raging skies, 

Through depths of grief, I'll bear the weight of pain, 

Seeking redemption 'neath remorseful cries.

With each cresting wave, 

memories restart, 

Until the storm abates, 

and mends her heart

Through sorrow's depths, redemption I shall claim,

And wait till peaceful tides will quench the flame.

Author's Note

"He broke her heart. A queen with kind, passionate, caring from heart.
it's hard to sail through the sea with Strom of her emotions.
No stars are there to light his path. He broke her heart, it's hard to sail. He'll roam in the sea, he'll wait where the Strom will take him. He'll suffer unless and until the Strom is calm. He'll sail with deep sorrow in her heart, asking for forgiveness, until the Strom is calm."

He's still roaming in the storm of her heart. Don't you think, if she doesn't want, he might got caught under the almighty, uncontrollable Strom in her heart. He's still there because she wants him to be.
She's a queen of devotion, and he breaks her heart.

Will she be ever able to forgive him...? What do you think...?

Reviews

[The_Ancient_Rock]

I don't know...

Does he deserves her forgiveness?

Wonderful poetry.

Keep it up. I enjoyed it very much.

Sometimes... Broken hearts can mend.

👍

Blessed be!!!

[Soyam]

Thanks for your kind words and valuable time.

I appreciate it a lot. ☺

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are welcome honey.