Dualic_love

When it was said that love's no sin,

Why then be punished, again and again?

You inflict wounds, but ask me to endure, 

       With borrowed breath, you say, "Keep living for sure."   

Love, when it touched the earthly ground,

Life pledged to you, a sacrifice profound.

Love remained alive, amidst the slain,

Yet the one who loved was met with pain.

If this is the limit, we shall transcend, 

Love will persist, even if it portends.

In silence, love will silently fade away, 

This fortune unveiled on love's own display.

  

Author's Note

Just random thoughts...

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

You write such a powerful poem of loving... of life in that love... and the pain in that love. The poem aches to become a story... and the story into a book of endless pages. I have to wonder who is this alive in your poetry... this sacred love... surviving... suffering... yet always rising. Everything is stirred by your thoughts.

[Soyam]

Nah... not that good, like you but ... it's something I penned, when my heart cried because of my expectation.... just random thoughts n nothing. ...
Hope anyone can describe the endless pain and immortality of love into book but if I'll try, words become short...
" so you want to know who's he...?

He's both near and far, a paradox true,
A love I fought for, as battles ensue,
In the war of hearts, a valiant soul,
Now memories remain, making me whole.

For in the depths of remembrance, he thrives,
A flame eternal, where love survives,
Though parted in time, forever he'll be,
In the tapestry of my poetic decree."

He's an imagination... hope he's existing somewhere...

Thanks for your valuable time and kind words... I appreciate it a lot. ☺

[An owl on the moon]

I can only imagine that for you, he is waiting... anticipating your arrival in this life... so like a dream. 🤗

[Betty Hermelee]

Love is certainly not a sin... in fact it should be nurtured.... endured.... by both parties...yet it seems you've been punished by love and pain has been inflicted on you.... this poem is very powerful and well written
Warmly, B

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Very deep and profound.

You write beautifuly. I share your pain.

Blessed be!

[Soyam]

My pleasure you like it

Thanks for your kind words 🙏 I appreciate it.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are most welcome.

👍

[Anastasia]

How Romantic this was. My heart shivered. Thank you.

[Soyam]

Im glad you liked it.

Thanks for giving your valuable time and reviewing this...

[Anastasia]

I love it. Thank you

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Could it be? Love can only persist for so long and eventually it will die...maybe it cannot win.
if so, we are all in a lot of trouble.
j.

[Soyam]

Don't you think it'll be good if it wins...?

Love is something that's become immortal after dying....

Thanks for sharing your thoughts... I appreciate it :)