Devine Beauty

She's a Goddess

In the realm of the workplace, a boss divine,

With a body like a Goddess, a sight so fine.

Honest and alluring, she captivates the heart,

Her love, an intoxicating drug, a mesmerizing art.

Does calling her name hold a deeper allure?

A secret connection, a sentiment pure.

Her body, a temple, a vision divine,

Radiating beauty, an essence so fine.

Her eyes, like flowers in a radiant bloom,

Glimmers of passion, dispelling all gloom.

Their gaze, like killer waves upon the shore,

Enchanting souls with a depth to explore.

Her touch, a warm embrace of winter's embrace,

A raindrop's kiss, washing away every trace.

A cold breeze caressing, igniting a fire,

Her tender embrace, a true heart's desire.

She's love in its purest, most Devine form,

Melodies of her presence, a music to transform.

Fame graced upon her, like a heavenly light,

She shines with a brilliance, outshining the night.

Oh, beloved one, embodiment of Devine,

Your presence enchants, like a celestial shrine.

With beauty unmatched, in every aspect so true,

You're the epitome of love, in all that you do.

Author's Note

Just tried to describe the Devine beauty of beloved. If you are in love, I think this is what you found your beloved is like. In hope you'll like it.

Reviews

[FGFRANKLIN]

What an interesting picture you paint of an obviously obsessive love. I was wondering at the alternative spellings of "divine" and whether they were intentional, though. I noticed the difference is capitalized. Is it the name of a person perhaps? The AA BB rhyme scheme seemed to work well for the presentation. I enjoyed the read.

[Soyam]

Ah.. you noticed that...! Haha, well, actually I wanted to creat something related to women. A name similar to divinity, so I opt "Devine". It just sounds similar to divine.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Hope, there must be a divine beauty in your life too. ☺
Thanks for your kind words. I appreciate it.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Yes... it trully is... :)

You must have been very inspired...

Wonderful poetry...

And so real and true... for those in love...

True real love... shines never ending beauty upon all creatures...

Loved the poem...

;)

[Soyam]

My goodness you liked it...

Yes, love, for person in love is something down to earth.

Thanks for stopping by, and for your valuable time.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Can be down to earth or can lift us up in the clouds...

You are most welcome...

I got lots of free time... ;)

Blessed be!!!

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Omg I fell in love with the personality described here and wish could be this person as dynamic and lovely. Nicely done dude.

[Soyam]

Ooh girl , what the need to be like this, if you are already more than what I described. Everyone is unique and definitely you are beautiful Dhara.

Thanks for your visit dude. I'm glad you liked it.

[D. Mansfield]

Beautiful poem, nice writing

[Soyam]

My pleasure you like it.

Thanks for visiting:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Interesting timing of this poem, the expression of the beauty...Kate Winslett from that scene in Titanic when Jack paints her portrait.
I thought of that movie a lot this past week...and all the tragedy involved with the original sinking and then the five lost trying to explore the wreckage.
The ghost of the Titanic will "go on."

[Soyam]

Titanic is one of my most favorite movie. For we, Titanic is an emotion. Well Do you get the news of that "Taitan" submarine that blasted 2 days age, which has set his journey with 5 people to see that Titanic, underwater. Rest in piece.
Good to

[Soyam]

And that song "go on'' is soo soothing. I too just unable to remove those beautiful feelings of that movie, Titanic. Really, it's an emotion.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, really unfortunate tragedy.

[An owl on the moon]

Rumi has said, "Love is the mirror of devine beauty." Your words flow through this captivating enchantment... the very magic of loving... this that overwhelms the soul like nothing else. Here is the beauty... the light... the breath of all hope and wonder. Yes, this is what finding the beloved is like... so well voiced in every way.

[Soyam]

Yes, definitely... truly said " love us the mirror of Devine beauty " it's itself so Devine right...!!!

I'm glad you liked my work this much!... my pleasure...

Thanks for your kind words and for stopping by.

:)

[An owl on the moon]

Have been here it seems as long as the earth... so it's always a joy to hear the new song of a wondrous poet... :)

[Soyam]

What....!!! 😂 "here seems as long as earth..." wt...
That means you are older than God himself...

Literally funny...

[An owl on the moon]

I'm glad for the joy... okay... so maybe just 15 years here. 🤗Hoping to get back more. 🌞

[willweb]

Absolutely and euphorically beautiful. This piece is enchanting and reads like a song that lover's sing in harmony. Your rhymes are spot on and the meter or cadence makes this poem slide off of the tongue with ease. An amazing piece my friend.

[Soyam]

I'm elated my friend that my poem comes under your eyes... :)

Thanks for your kind words and time.
Yah... it might be good, but not that much like yours... my friend.