A journey of bliss

A pure bill journey

                               

                     

                   In love's embrace, a man did fall,

He surrendered his world, answering love's call.

He sacrificed all at his lover's feet,

To make her his mistress, their connection complete.

With every breath, he cherished her touch,

She was his Goddess, his love, so much.

They tied their bond, bound by marriage's thread,

Promising forever, their souls now wed.

She became his entire world, it's true,

Sweet kisses shared, their love so pure and true.

He waited and toiled, longing for the eve,

To embrace her warmth, in her arms to believe.

Beautiful dinners, nights so mesmerizing,

Their love, like stars, forever synchronizing.

Then a little one graced their sacred path,

Filling their lives with joy, amidst love's aftermath.

Excitement abounded, happiness came alive,

As their little one taught them to thrive.

With laughter and love, their days were blessed,

In their embrace, pure bliss confessed.

And so, their journey continues to unfold,

A story of love, more precious than gold.

With hearts intertwined, their spirits take flight,

Forever bound, in love's eternal light.

Author's Note

He's a man. Being a girl, I don't know how man feel about love. Just tried to blend some words with imaginations, how and what love mean for men. Hope you'll enjoy.
Forgive if I lack something.

Reviews

[willweb]

I think it depends on the man but I believe in love and your poem is pure and beautiful love, affection and adoration of another and then another. Love to me should be forever. Nowadays, that is not always the case but it could be if love were made important again. Love is important to me. Beautifully crafted, rhymed and expressed my friend.

[Soyam]

Yes my friend, it depends on man. While writing this the only image I hold In my mind is of a sweet American man, couple or father. A family man so this is the outcome.
Feel very good to hear what and how love matters for you. Hope your love is worth and is with you. Blessings for the limitless togetherness of your love.

My pleasure friend you liked it.

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is a beautiful and moving tribute to the power of love, and the way that it can transform our lives and fill them with joy and happiness. I love the way you describe the man who fell in love, and the sacrifices he made to be with his lover. The way you describe their bond, bound by marriage's thread, is particularly poignant, as it captures the way that love can unite us and make us feel whole. I also love the way you describe the little one who graced their path, and the way that their love continued to grow and flourish in the face of this new blessing. The way you describe their days being blessed with laughter and love is particularly heartwarming, as it captures the way that love can bring us so much joy and happiness. Overall, I think your poem is a beautiful and moving tribute to the power of love, and it made me feel both happy and inspired.

[Soyam]

My pleasure you like it.
Thanks for your kind words and for showing love by reviewing my poetry.
Thanks for the visit. I appreciate your time.

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

If you have time, do check out my poems too and let me know what do you think.

[Soyam]

Yes, for sure I would love to have a look on them...

[Betty Hermelee]

Your imagination is quite beautiful and imaginative, eventful, blissful; You portray a journey of bountiful love and passion, a journey that will continue to flourish ....as time goes on; I thin that men can give as much love as women, maybe more... and you show it in captivating piece.... and then comes the baby, made of love.....and the journey lives on..... just exceptional words put together...
Best, B

[Soyam]

I'm glad you understand the love poetry of mine . My pleasure you liked it. Thanks for your valuable time and kind words. I appreciate it.

Sorry for the late reply, I haven't noticed it 😅.

[Betty Hermelee]

no worries, everyone is busy, appreciate very much!
Warmly, B

[An owl on the moon]

You created such a beautiful space for love... a whole journey to unfold it in... to wrap it in... it is the path to beauty and peace that so many seek... yet so few find... May your poem inspire others to love this deeply. 🌹

[Soyam]

Just tried to imagine how love mean for man...
"A journey with soft touch and embrace of love"

It's my pleasure you liked it so much... I appreciate your time . Thanks for your kind words.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Wondeful poem as always...

Forgive me for taking so long to read it... been a bit busy lately.

Yes sounds like any man's dream... pure bliss.

Fantastic poetry... as always.

Hope you'll never stop writing...

;)

[Soyam]

You remember "ode to native American " of yours, I keep that in mind while penning this.
read moreYou remember "ode to native American " of yours, I keep that in mind while penning this.

I'm very much glad you liked it.

No man, no sorry... not everyone is always free right...!!!

Hoping the same from you:)

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Sometimes this site as a glitch... can't read your whole review... only untill penning this. :)

[The_Ancient_Rock]

I'm so glad my poety inspired you. Your poetry inspires me as well.
Thank you for being... exactly who you are. Blessed be!!! :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a beautiful love story! The complete love of a husband for a wife and their child is precious. Well written. Lydi**

[Soyam]

I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for the visit.