Poetically, your skills shine bright in vivid colors of beautiful imagery that lite the glowing embers of sensual appeal in ways pure and sweet … timing and rhythm are spot-on smooth as succulent silk in every sense -- as impeccably as your envied rhymes.
In my mind's-eye, this piece is quite visually intricate and exquisitely sophisticated for a young female, but who's to say how deep the wondrous experiences and sensations a lady might have encountered in her moments of "self-embracing love".
A masterful poem worthy of the most accomplished poet's envy … I can offer no constructive critique, except to say, "I loved it all … title, a,a,b,b, Quatrain composition, theme, and perfect artwork!"
Thank you ever so warmly and gratefully for sharing You, Soyam, and your excellent poetic skills!
Namasté 🙏 ⁓ Richard
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
My pleasure you like my work so much.
It's nothing but just a piece of imagination. I felt t.. read moreMy pleasure you like my work so much.
It's nothing but just a piece of imagination. I felt to write it, so I.
Thanks for your kind words and for your time to stopping by.
And yes , that "Namaste" was unexpected and surprising. :)
You are a wonderful poet, and you have a serious command of the English language!
I also LOVE the beach, being a native Floridian... FYI
So, that made me love the imagery in this piece.
Keep creating!
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
My pleasure you like it... just in a learning process...
Yes I write but definitely not bett.. read moreMy pleasure you like it... just in a learning process...
Yes I write but definitely not better than you...
Poetically, your skills shine bright in vivid colors of beautiful imagery that lite the glowing embers of sensual appeal in ways pure and sweet … timing and rhythm are spot-on smooth as succulent silk in every sense -- as impeccably as your envied rhymes.
In my mind's-eye, this piece is quite visually intricate and exquisitely sophisticated for a young female, but who's to say how deep the wondrous experiences and sensations a lady might have encountered in her moments of "self-embracing love".
A masterful poem worthy of the most accomplished poet's envy … I can offer no constructive critique, except to say, "I loved it all … title, a,a,b,b, Quatrain composition, theme, and perfect artwork!"
Thank you ever so warmly and gratefully for sharing You, Soyam, and your excellent poetic skills!
Namasté 🙏 ⁓ Richard
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
My pleasure you like my work so much.
It's nothing but just a piece of imagination. I felt t.. read moreMy pleasure you like my work so much.
It's nothing but just a piece of imagination. I felt to write it, so I.
Thanks for your kind words and for your time to stopping by.
And yes , that "Namaste" was unexpected and surprising. :)
I loved the below lines.
"Our rhythms sync, a sensual dance,
Lost in each other's longing glance,
In this embrace, we find our bliss,
Euphoria's realm, we cannot miss."
The dance of love should lead us to wonderful place. Thank you dear Soyam for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote
Its beautiful the rhyming the scheme and the way it has been presented, it's just flawless as i can feel you saying this to your beloved in front of me.
First rate imagery in this beautiful setting. You took me there. Self love is important. If we feel good about ourselves then it is likely to influence the way we feel about others. Sensual and uplifting. You have some great lines here Soyam.
"a stained reminder of their grace"
Oh how I love that line.
In the speaker's world, the romantic, passionate symphony has so many movements, it never
reaches a final note.
j.
Absolutely beautiful and enchanting. The scene created by your words and phrases takes me on a euphoric journey to the sand and sun and love. Really nice.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
That's my goodness you liked it :)
Hope you enjoyed your euphoric journey well...read moreThat's my goodness you liked it :)