Hers creator _1_

Here is a small poem where he is praising his beloved one.

I have never seen one with such beauty as she

Hers is the beauty of sculptured idols of Ajanta

Her beauty has bewitched my gaze,

Beauty is an alluring song,

Beauty has a heady fragrance ,

Hers is the beauty of scented moonlight ,

Hers is the beauty of hunting melody ,

Hers is the beauty of blossoming garden 

Hers is the beauty of first light of dawn,

Hers is the most exquisitely hewn beauty ,

Warmth and smooth as sandalwood ,

Pure and delicate as marbles,

It is impossible to describe that beautiful beloved,

Praise to her creator! Praise to her creator!

To look at her is to become spellbound ,

Praise to her creator!  Praise to her creator! 

Author's Note

Praise to her creator! Praise to her creator! "

Hope you'll like it.

Reviews

[Aura]

Beautiful work! It is truly a different feeling when someone compliments you on beauty, and for you to emphasize "her" beauty in this poem, speaks of astonishment and amazement at how delicately and lovingly she was created. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading.

[Soyam]

My pleasure you enjoyed...!!!

Thanks for your kind words and valuable time...

I appreciate it...!

Sorry for late reply, I hadn't noticed it, my fault

[Aura]

You are most welcome!

[willweb]

The poem itself is very beautiful...praise to its creator!!!

[Soyam]

Praise to their creator.

Hehe! Thanks for the visit.

I'm glad you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

When the sweetness of love overtake us. All we can see and feel is beauty. I loved the positive and hopeful feel of the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
coyote

[Soyam]

I'm glad you liked this.

Thanks for the visit :)

[Akinlolu]

Your Poem's tone makes me smile. It's not the beauty that catches my attention though you make that very clear but the response of the narrator is very unusual. The belief in a creator. Ascribing praise to Him. Beautifully done.

[Soyam]

Im glad my poem becomes the reason of your smile.

Indeed praise to "their" creator! Praise to "their" creator

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Indeed...

"She" is all beauty...

Praise to her creator!!!

Blessed be!!!

;)

[Soyam]

Hope "she" will step to your life soon and change your life!!!

:)

[The_Ancient_Rock]

So do I... believe me.

That would be the sweetest thing.

Thank you!read moreSo do I... believe me.

That would be the sweetest thing.

Thank you!

Blessed be!!!

;)

[Betty Hermelee]

Beauty is repeated to really make one believe that her lover think of her as a Goddess....this is a love poem to the extreme....and whoever created her should get the Nobel Prize for BEAUTY....the poem is strong and still soft at times to emphasize a person of not only of beauty but also of grace, elegance and allure...
nice work!
Best, B

[Soyam]

May be she's someone beautiful like you!!,

:)

Thanks for your valuable time!

[Betty Hermelee]

That's a very sweet comment! and you're very welcome
Best, B