"Eternal grace of love"

"You are the most beautiful soul,

And I bow down my love in front of you.

And the whole world will, let them have my point of view.

Maybe loving you is a losing game,

But to your eternal soul, it's like divine fame.

The concept of soul is something down to earth,

And my love, I can't express to all your worth.

Your soul is the luminance of love,

Let me embrace your presence, and that's nostalgic enough.

I don't know what universe holds for me,

And if I didn't love you, I meant nothing to be.

Leaving the universe behind, I want to hug you tight.

Leaving the pain of mortality, I want our soul to fly together,

Handing towards eternity."

Author's Note

Loving someone's soul is the best thing which can give the eternal pleasure and peace. In my this work , I just has tried to bind the concept of love and soul together, which both in the same time are eternal. Feel free to comment and share your view. It'll my pleasure to have your view. Thanks

Reviews

[E.P. Robles]

This poem seems to convey a deep and passionate love, emphasizing the beauty and significance of the beloved's soul.

Let's delve into the analysis now:

The poem begins with a declaration of the beloved's soul as the most beautiful, which immediately establishes a sense of reverence and adoration.

The poet expresses love and humility by bowing down in front of the beloved, suggesting a sense of devotion and admiration.

The line "And the whole world will, let them have my point of view" indicates a desire for others to recognize the beloved's beauty and value. It implies that the poet's perspective on the beloved is so profound that they wish for the entire world to share it.

The phrase "loving you is a losing game" suggests that this poet acknowledges the risks and potential heartache involved in loving the beloved. It implies that despite these challenges, the love she feels for the beloved's eternal soul is akin to divine fame—an elevated and sublime experience.

The concept of the soul is then explored as something grounded in earthly reality, an idea likely inspired by Wordsworth's belief in the spiritual connection between humanity and nature. You, the 'poet' acknowledges the limitations of her ability to express the worth of the beloved's soul, emphasizing its ineffable nature.

The imagery of the beloved's soul as "the luminance of love" portrays it as a radiant source of affection and tenderness. This imagery evokes a sense of warmth and brightness, symbolizing the deep emotional connection shared between the speaker and the beloved.

The yearning to embrace the beloved's presence and the nostalgia it brings suggests a longing for a past connection or a sense of familiarity and comfort in their love. It hints at the idea that being in the beloved's presence is enough to evoke a sense of deep longing and sentimentality.

Overall, this poem echoes themes of love, beauty, spirituality, and the profound impact that such connections can have on one's perception of the world and sense of self.

The imagery and emotional depth exhibited in this poem are reminiscent of William Wordsworth's lyrical style, particularly his exploration of the human connection to nature and the transformative power of love.

[Soyam]

I'm so glad that you liked it.

Yup that Wordsworth, actually I belong to literature background so during my graduation I read that "preface to lyrical ballads by william wordsworth " and I m very much inspired by his concept of poetry, how to write so I just followed down his methods while writing this.

Thanks for your beautiful analysis.

[E.P. Robles]

You are very welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful, so gentle and so kind.
"Leaving the universe behind, I want to hug you tight.
Leaving the pain of mortality, I want our soul to fly together,
Handing towards eternity."
I adored the above lines. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Soyam]

I'm glad you liked it,.

Thanks for reading.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Wow... I think that's very deep and beautiful...

Really enjoy your poetry.

Yes... love... what a wonderful emotion.

;)

Great poetry!!!

Blessed be!!!

[Soyam]

Aah! Thanks for your kind words!!!

Bless you too!

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Wow... Thank you!

You most welcome!

;)

[Purab Biswas]

In "Eternal Grace of Love," YOU beautifully captures the essence of profound love and the ethereal nature of the soul. With heartfelt words, the poet paints a picture of devotion and admiration, expressing a deep reverence for the subject of their affection.

The poem begins with a declaration of the beloved's inner beauty, as the poet bows down in love and invites the world to witness the magnificence they see. The choice of words and imagery creates a sense of reverence, emphasizing the elevated status of the beloved's soul.

The poet skillfully explores the concept of the soul, grounding the ethereal notion in earthly terms. The depth of the poet's love is conveyed through their inability to fully express the worth and luminance of the beloved's soul. This inability to capture the essence of the beloved's soul in words adds a touch of longing and sentimentality to the poem.

The imagery of embracing the presence of the beloved and the nostalgia it evokes adds an emotional layer to the poem. It hints at a deep connection that transcends time and space, suggesting a desire for eternal togetherness.

The concluding lines encapsulate the poet's dedication, declaring that their love for the beloved is inseparable from their existence. The imagery of leaving behind the universe and mortal pain to embrace the beloved's soul amplifies the intensity of the emotions conveyed.

Overall, "Eternal Grace of Love" is a poignant and passionate tribute to the power of love and the eternal nature of the soul. Yours poetic craftsmanship shines through, as they eloquently express deep emotions and invite readers to contemplate the boundless dimensions of love.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I love this esp this verse

Leaving the pain of mortality, I want our soul to fly together,
Handing towards eternity."

I understand this sort of writing
It’s unique and special
Love it
I can really relate to this truly

[Soyam]

My goodness!

Well if you can relate to this, then I'm sure you are a great one! read moreMy goodness!

Well if you can relate to this, then I'm sure you are a great one!

Coz it's very rare to have the actual understanding of soul...

Thanks for your feedback!

:)

[JayG]

• "You are the most beautiful soul,

Why thank you. How perceptive of you to notice.

• And I bow down my love in front of you.

Don't do that. I'll trip when I try to leave the chair...and it's crowded under the desk.

My point? This is you—someone unknown to the reader—talking TO someone unknown, for unknown reasons. Given that, what's in it for the reader?

No one cares what kind of day we're having. No one comes here wondering what's on your mind. They read poetry because they expect you to entertain them, not talk about yourself. They want to be made to feel and care, not be better informed on what's meaningful to you.

We don't tell the reader that we cried at a funeral, for example, we give the READER reason to weep. So when you write a poem don't focus on what matters to you. Make it matter to the reader.

But... How to do that wasn't one of the things we were taught in school, because professions, like fiction Writing, Poetry, and Engineering, etc. are acquired in addition to the business related skills we're given in school.

There, you were given the nonfiction writing skills that employers favor, not those of the poet. So digging into them can make a HUGE difference.

To help, try this: Mary Oliver's, A Poetry Handbook is filled with interesting surprises, like why we'll choose the word rock over stone, in a given situation (and vice versa) and why no one ever shouts "Oh feces!"when they're angry.

You can download a readable copy (though not on a phone) on the site below, but in the end, you'll probably want a copy of your own.
https://yes-pdf.com/book/1596

Sorry my news wasn't better. But since for you the necessary context, backstory, and intent is already in your mind, it works perfectly. And since you'll not address the problem you don't see as being one, I thought you might want to know.

Hang in there, and keep on writing.

Jay Greenstein
https://jaygreenstein.wordpress.com/category/the-craft-of-writing/the-grumpy-old-writing-coach

[Soyam]

Well, I'll thank you for your words. I'll not take it in any negative way , I accept it. I'm a learner, a beginner. I welcome your feedback open heartily. For me it's nothing more than a filter to purify my writing. I'll try my best for further writing. Thanks again for your suggestions. Well, I just wrote this for fun, for my dearer one. I like the sarcasm.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I think this is beautifully written. It has a lot of passion to it that is so easily felt. I like your use of the word "handing" at the end. I pictured it like 'hand in hand' or 'holding hands'. Wonderfully explained and expressed. tyfs

[Soyam]

My pleasure. And yes, by that "handing '' I mean of holding hands together and walking towards eternity. Thanks for your kind words.