Cacophony

In a world of billions of people why do only a few person touches us......

Cacophony

Sea of people

Emerging and vanishing

Into the realms

Where imagination and reality meets.

Sea of people passes by us, everyday,

We talk

Not looking into each others eye,

They hold our hands

Some touches our body

But not our heart

We talk so much,

Politics, sports, of nation, war and the world

And all the other things futile

That we thing bother us

 

Somewhere sometime an angel comes

Looking into our eyes

Speaking so much

Without any words….

Just a another stranger, we think

And unknowing they captures our souls

Touches our heart

Takes us to the realms

That we long forgotten

In planning for future and the pains of the past.

 

 

In the cacophony of world

We are left to wonder

Was it real or just a dream!

All that remains is the faint hangover

Of the moment that it touched our heart…….

Reviews

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Hi Sourodip :-)
Yes, 'all things beautiful are a brief shining light.'
Your poem "Cacophony" spoke of that clearly.

I did notice a few grammatical errors. Though I'm sure the more you write and read, the more you will improve in written english..
Goodluck, and thanks for sharing.

[Sourodip]

thanks for pointing out.... will try to improve....:)

[Poetry child]

This is nice, has an air of softness to it that moves the heart...
aside from a couple of typos...it's pretty nice write :)

[Lonely Islander]

this poem was really beautiful especially the second paragraph. i loved how you gave a clear image of what u say...its simple but it also means a lot so its awesome:-):-):-D.

[KAOlmsted]

This is so true...very well done. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

[Georgia Gypsy]

It is so easy to get lost in the noise of what goes on around us, it was easy to feel the hustle and bustle...a good description and really enjoyed reading! Thanks for sharing :)

[Sourodip]

Glad you enjoyed it....:)

[Riley Mistwood]

very nice poem

[Sourodip]

thanks...glad u liked it..:)

[Sleepless]

this is the same feeling i feel when something also happens to me, it feels like a dream i like what you say in this poem great job !:)

[Sourodip]

thanks for the first review....good to know others can relate too...

[Sleepless]

yeah i thought i was the only one :)