Impression of Loneliness

Sinking in the quicksand of loneliness

A desperate soul still searching for a company

A friend, a hope, piece of life- love;

 

A known voice of an unknown person

Rises from the deep

Words of solace and peace,

A passing shower of joy over my heart

Then there is a silence " horror of loneliness

A desperation of finding that voice

And in that voice I find peace.

 

The desert is never ending

The journey is tiring

Quest of becoming nobody to somebody

Suffers and moans like a motherless child;

That cry echoes alone, all alone

Up and down with the wind

Gathers like a cloud to fall like a rain

Upon the desert of loneliness.

 

Between the thoughts of my mind

And touch of my fingers- lies loneliness

Then word drops one by another

On a blank paper; on a empty screen

To create, - a poetry may be

Or just an impression of loneliness

Signed in pain by the ink of dejection.

Reviews

[Moniba]

Love the last stanza.

[Sahar moonlight]

A poem from bottom of a heart, its really so descriptive, so well expressing loneliness.

[Shy Girl]

Wow!! Such depth falls between each word and feeling you expressed. I liked the last stanza best...how best to describe the poem its self. Just a beautiful piece altoghter. I can connect to the loneliness and sorrow of heart and mind. Really a wonderful poem :)

[Manpreet]

This is a great poem and now one of my favorites!

[Pradnya]

wow!!! i liked this poem

[Lily Mae]

"Suffers and moans like a motherless child" this line alone made me tap into the emotions of your work.. I really have enjoyed reading you..x

[Myra Lochner]

Universal feelings individualized. Well done, Poet.

[Veronica Chandler]

This is a haunting and beautiful piece, "A passing shower of joy over my heart! Just beautiful. "Signed in pain by ink", this poem is so expressive and well written.

[Robin]

there is a freedom gained when we release that loneliness to ink , you have expressed it well