A Traveller Of Love

Closer is the death

Dream lies in far

Life is a slave

Knuckles down by desirous breath

 

Desire- of having you

An immortal wish

Heart is a trickster

In simple wiles, it splits me by two

 

A temptation revives

Dream wakes, again

Life wants you, still

To live, to comfort, to survive

 

In a quandary of faith

Tears mixing smiles

Begins a new journey

A traveller of love, beyond death.

 

 

Reviews

[RichGee]

Great imagery...love is what motivates us to live.
Very refreshing art.

[Sourav]

Thank you :)

[WindSong]

Your poem has all the elements of struggling to survive what the heart and soul yearns for..to be one in the universe. Very well composed and presented. I enjoyed reading this amazing poem!

WindSong

[Kesav Easwaran]

Love is the motive of every life...love is the motivating force in every life...well-written piece, Sourav...liked the way you sructured the two closing lines

[Pradnya]

WOW!!

[Sukriti Suki]

This is very well written. Takes you along as you read it..Well thought out with some exceptional thoughts.

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This poem is a journey itself. A refreshing view on life, love, and the et cetera. Wonderfully written.

[Clay Feet]

Living, loving and laughing in the face of the inevitable. Great mix of imagery. Quite enjoyable.

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This is wonderful, A most enjoyable read.
I agree with poppy it's profound.

[Ruth]

This is amazing work love! A profound poem! Life is indeed a serious series of journey's! Profound poem xx