Love Remains

But the beauty that still remains

In your eyes

Like a mirror of truth

And the droplets of rain

Provides the food for my life

And I remain.

 

All the beauty still left around me

In your touch of caress

Like a moon in dreary night

And innocence of a child

Instigates a river within me

And love remains.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Simply Lovely and Romantic.



I loved this thank you for sharing
your Elegant write.


Blessings. kindred poet

[Matching Socks]

Simply beautiful.
Enjoyed this one. :)

[swarupa]

A brief expression of love ..with a pure heart .. nice 1 dear ..

[CoraZanini]

Sourav this is beautiful!"But the beauty that still remains
In your eyes
Like a mirror of truth". my favourite line,it0s magical. And the visual pictures are also very good.Keep me informed:)

[Sourav]

Sure :) Thank you for your review!

[Aethereal]

It goes without saying that moods stay with us long after the one's who made them surge inside of us have gone because without our moods who would we be? If we were just composed of memory and logic, then we wouldn't be human, we'd be computers. Our complex of moods are our identity. In fact, I don't think that we'd be conscious at all without our moods. Our moods are our treasures. A mood is the one thing that we can’t program into a computer. Computers don’t love, or hate each other.

[Pax]

this poems quite says how love remains after a dead or a sudden lost of a loveone. beautifully done!

[Shaquana Adams]

This flows off the page beautifully and the imagery was wonderful. Very nicely penned! :)
-QuanaWana

[Sourav]

Thank you! :)

[Debbie_Philly]

Very very beautiful...... flows wonderfully ! :)

[Sourav]

Thank you Debbie :)

[maria ( rose)]

But the beauty that still remains
In your eyes
Like a mirror of truth
This poem was such a delight to read..great job!!

[Sourav]

Thank you :)