No Death to Die

With you in my mind I traversed the stream

And despair became hope, fear turned into courage

I woke up from my frozen dream

Unbidden you came but only to encourage...

There is no farewell, there is no grief, 

Nor do I witness the fall of leaf

As I gratefully look at you- yet in disbelief;

What you have in your secrecy- forbidden to reveal

And what I don’t have that shamelessly makes me cry

But with your touch of finesse, my wounds you may easily heal

Today I perceive your true colours, now there’s no death to die.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words and thoughts.
"But with your touch of finesse, my wounds you may easily heal
Today I perceive your true colours, now there’s no death to die."
I liked the above lines. Some people can make us feel safe and we shall never forget. Thank you Sourav for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[John Anderson]

intriguing poem...i liked everything about this one. Great job

[Eric Cox]

Cool write here. Good to read.

[Sourav]

Thank you!

[Eric Cox]

You're welcome

[Donald Meikle]

Well said and felt

[Neville]

Very nice indeed, N

[Tai Ryens]

..Reincarnation?
Honestly, no other thought comes to head. I do imagine this is what you must feel like towards your lover: a rebirth inside yourself.

[Sourav]

Excellent!

[Steven]

A deeply felt tribute to a love who has saved you from the darkness in yourself. You painted just enough of the picture, in the right corners.