Oasis

She tried to find peace in the friendship
As heart was at ease than relationship;

Eventually she smiled again in this bliss
blooming like a flower in this breeze;

With time friendship grew and she was afraid again
everything was flashing in front of her eyes again;
This time she was sure to love again throwing all her worries in drain
But ....... the question is: Does friendship is ready to take stand for her? or everything is happening in vain;

She kept searching,she found no answer
Some things find beauty in the way as they were ;

Out of somewhere she jolted,
Ah.... she opened her eyes,
She found herself in the oasis.

Oasis....Her Family in the midst of this world
She smiled :-)

Reviews

[K.Oakland]

I am not sure why the narrator is afraid, is it that they feel like the friendship is not equal or that the friend doesn't really like her? Might be more intimate if you switched this to first person. Good first draft, but you might want to play with it and make it more detailed to clue the reader in a little more.