Faces of fire

Faces of fire

A Poem by Soumya Deouskar
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There are so many ways to look at it!

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Why does a fire burn?
Does kindle a rage of hatred,
Or just simply illuminate a room?
Does it shout the absence of someone,
On the White candle,
Or just simply brings a dreamy sleep?
Does it illuminate my today,
Or just darkens the future,
By swallowing thousands of men?
Does it ignite a basic meal,
Or just turns people into his?
Does the fire simply burn,
Or screams his thousand faces?

© 2017 Soumya Deouskar


Author's Note

Soumya Deouskar
Hey! Please do leave an honest review and help me improve my writings. I would truly appreciate that ! And, of course , thank you so so much for reading!

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The fire is left wanting... So it burns and burns, or does it feel wanted, and coax us into gentle sleep... Warm and with full-belly... A thousand faces of heat... Blazingly penned...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Soumya Deouskar

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Silente for taking time to read my poem and give an honest review! I truly appreci.. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Of course... My pleasure, and keep at it...!
I totally connected this to whatever is happening in the world today. We need more people like you to open eyes in such a beautiful manner that one can't help but be touched. I loved this poem. This Is one of the bests I've ever read. Keep writing, darling!

Love,
Vasilees

Posted 7 Years Ago


Soumya Deouskar

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Vasilees!
You truly elevate my confidence!
Vasilees Sybissyl

7 Years Ago

That's kind of my job, dearie.

Love,
Vasilees
Unique and creative...I really like your thoughts...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Soumya Deouskar

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Najam Us Saher! Your words truly mean a lot to me!
And, thank you once aga.. read more
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You are most welcome :)
Actually, I never thought of it, hm. This is so true. A totally different view with a burning write! This writing is just lighting like a candle, so are you!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Soumya Deouskar

7 Years Ago

Thank you Shasha! You truly encourage me to write!
Shasha

7 Years Ago

Oh, you're welcome!!!

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Added on June 6, 2017
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Soumya Deouskar
Soumya Deouskar

Bhopal, Madhya Pradesh, India



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I'm just a person who loves to find stories. I believe stories are not the words which smear out of my ink but out of the poetry of everyday life. And I am on a journey to find out the my story. more..

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