Eternal

 

 

It is a night of darkness, a song of ethereal pain,
wolves vent their howls. The immortal one
awakes.

Evil shrouds her pale form,
a timeless wrath.

Her raven hair cascades over
translucent ivory shoulders, and her
full scarlet lips part slightly, to taste the
blood streaming from the
pale flesh beneath
her.

Now a night of taking,
I hunger.

Reviews

[cecil]

very well written with darkness and descriptive words that keep the reader captivated and longing for more and more,,blessings..Cecil

[morbid]

ooo i loved this. sounds like it should be in part of a movie

[Sarah]

My, this was dark. (: Great description though, good job!