Addicted

 

I can feel the smoothness of your skin 
As my lips follow the curve of your neck
The touch you like this and it feels like sin
I'm addicted
I can feel your heart beating rapidly 
I feel your pulse as my lips slide over a vein
I let my teeth tear at you
And let the blood over flow 
I'm addicted
It's like floating, the feeling you have created
You become part of me, once again
The blood and just you, Is enough to keep me
I'm addicted
My lips go to meet yours as you taste yourself
The bitter-sweet taste and I'm yours again
Forever addicted.

Reviews

[Brandon Taylor-Black]

What a beautiful write.
Well worded, it flows excellently and not a word is wasted.
Beautifully penned!
Bravo

'D'

[S.E. Conway]

i love the wording, mixed with the font and the placement... all works well to show your point and concept to the reader

very nice write!!1 ^.^

-s.e.

[ToRnBaByB]

Wow, April. I'm addicted to your poems lol. Nice job.
I can really feel the emotion pulsing through each word.