I Lived My LIfe Without You

A poem about my father...

You may have thought i didn't see,

or that i hadn't heard,

But i got every word,

Perhaps you thought i missed it all,

And that i wouldnt understand,

But Dad, i picked up everything,

Its written on my heart,

I built a strong foundation,

No one can take away,

Ive grown up with values,

And im very glad i did,

So heres to you, Father

I LIVED MY LIFE WITHOUT YOU....

Reviews

[stipe]

Wow. Lived my life without my dad. But in a different way. Good writing. I think the lengths just right, adds to the absence... if that makes sense

[Rockebah]

That is a very beautiful and heartfelt piece of writing though i felt that you should of increased it in lenght. Good job.