Weather

Just a simple little one I wrote the other day.

 

If ever there was weather, that could follow me,

My weather for wherever my soul chose to be,

sunshine for the time, when around me is grey,

then rain for the pain to be washed all away,

a breeze aimed to please as it flows through the mind,

a gail then to sail and take in new times,

the thrill of a chill to kill heated glances,

some snow so I know when to cool off advances.

Reviews

[Rambling Prose]

I love your style as it's romantic and and unforced. You express beautifully.

Nicely done...

[vanishing]

This is well written, and speaks in an accentuated passion
One can feel the passion in in the wording

A very expressive meaning "waether" and how it plays its part
in metaphorical terms, your vision comes to life, A Very nice reading.

Thanks!

[Natalie Brettell]

I had to leave a comment on this Dean.
It's rather emotional, I certainly think so.
Favourite line 'the rain for the pain to be all washed away'. That line got to me.

Well done. It's lovely.

love Natalie.x