Energetic Laziness

Again recently re-discovered, written some years ago.

ENERGETIC LAZINESS

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

An over-crowded silence,

Fills me with dark fear,

Kaleidoscopic memories,

How did I get here?

Blood filled bullets searching,

Amongst my tears - hollow,

Is time still mine?

Can this soul shine?

Such answers I don't know.

An energetic laziness,

A life to understand,

An intrusion called confusion,

Held inside my plans,

Slowly it can heal me,

Someday will turn to night,

Goodbye my sun,

Walk find your run,

A new dawn sits in sight.

Reviews

[EvesDaughter]

There is something to be said
for brevity. This poem is simply
stated and well appreciated by
this poet. I like your style
and I like this poem.

[LilyGrace]

I like this and I'm not entirely sure why... I like it's simplicity, and I love the line 'walk find your run'. I like the hints of hope within the confusion and despair. Generally a good write.
LGD