The Fight

The Fight

A Poem by Dante Balintyne

Though I do not want to give in

It feels as if its impossible to keep this monster from coming out from within

This emotionless cold being feels as if he is taking over my soul

Now I must find a way to fight or never get out of this deepening hole

Its closing in on me and sucking away everything

This dark force is bringing unfightable suffering

My soul frozen I now look for a way to thaw

I just hope I will be fast enough before I end up emotionless and raw

© 2012 Dante Balintyne


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Beautiful. You have a blessed writing skill. ^^

Posted 15 Years Ago


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this was deep. good write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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wonderful emotional poem, Derek. I believe you are stronger than you think :) Hang in there, I know it may seem difficult right now but you are strong enough to overcome ... take care ...

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Added on March 9, 2009
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Dante Balintyne
Dante Balintyne

Harrison Twp., MI



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Well...saying I wear my emotions on my sleave is a bit of an understatement. I think of all the changes that I have gone through emotionally and I almost cant believe it. I started writing when I star.. more..

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