Vampire Vengance!

A drastic, terrifying poem about a Vampire

My eyes are Luminous in the dark of night

 

My eyes will scorch from the heat of light,

 

I am driven by a craving thirst

 

The last victim tastes as good as the first,

 

For my greatast fear is a wooden stake

 

I hide away scare off my fate,

 

But beware of the sacred holy water

 

That’s where hunters tend to loiter,

 

I can morph into a bat

 

Far from friendly and able to pat,

 

So do you know who I am

 

Lets just say I am no man,

 

And I know who you are beast

 

The plump main course for our next Feast.

Author's Note

hope you liked it!

Reviews

[Su]

Nice really good

[Sera]

OOh lala i love the rhym @ first i thought " Twilght" !! lol... its really nice :)

[Stormy]

this piece flowed well

[W. J. Howard]

Loved the opening and closing!

Very interesting piece, thanks for entering the contest.
-Nice write-
-Satan's Toaster

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I loved this piece of writing! Specially its flow, yours words are flowing so effortlessly here...
I also loved the ending lines, they concluded the feeling of entire poem so perfectly well and in such a beautiful way..
Great piece of writing :)

Thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts here!

Keep writing..

[mirui]

This a really great poem. It's interesting to read and you must be very interested in vampires.