Mirror | rorriM

just an accumulation of s**t I've been feeling.

I will not reflect into shades of gray for you,

I will not despair over things that you’ll do

I’ll wait until it’s my turn, until I can see

So I can show the world all you’ve done to me

You are loveless and worthless, too weak to understand

Desperate in rage, you can try to command

But you’re there, in the dots of my pen and darkness of ink

You remain clear when there is nothing left to think

You mirror my movements without clarity or grace

A rival to most and lost in this place,

I will not reflect into shades of glass for you

I could care less what you try and do.  

Author's Note

I don't even know. This is just an accumulation of shit I've been feeling for like four different people, probably more, definitely not less. It started with a clear inspiration and turned into...uh...THIS. Just let me know what you think >.< Reviews will be returned. Oh, and constructive crit would be lovely, will also be returned.

Reviews

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

I love this it was well put nice job..

~SK

[Bud]

The only criticism I have is merely a compliment of your well written piece of work. Your feelings clearly come through. I feel a bitterness, to say the least, in this. But it's also a very honest write. Outstanding, as always.

[PaperHearts]

This was a really fantastic write. There was something so vulnerable and emotional about this write, which was then balanced out with a real feeling of strength and resistance. I really liked the line "I will not reflect into shades of gray for you", as it was an original, beautifully-worded concept that I could totally relate to. A very thought-provoking, captivating poem. Nice work,
~PaperHearts