Moving On

You said I couldn't move on, but I'm doing it anyway.

All you ever do is ache

 

Aren’t you good enough for anything else?

 

All you ever do is take

Take take take

What isn’t yours

My TIME

You’re taking my TIME

And I can’t do a goddam thing about it

Because you’re all ready

You’re already dead

 

I can’t kill off your memory,

Buried thick deep inside my head

 

I can’t throw away the remnants of yesterday

I want to so badly

It HURTS

And YOU

YOU just do what it is that you do anyway

 

You prey, you seek

You take you wreak

 

You keep me

From being what I want to be

And I am SO

Sick of it

 

But I can’t get away from you

Even in my sleep

Even…in writing

I just can’t get away from you

 

Haven’t you destroyed enough?

You take everything

That isn’t yours to TAKE

Lives, hearts

Beating muscles and pumping blood

No one SAID

You can do that

But you do it ANYWAY

 

So you know what?

F**k you.

YOU said I can’t move on

You said,

You’ll never be just a memory

But F**K YOU

I’m moving on

I’m doing it anyway.

Just like you

 

I’m moving on anyway.

Author's Note

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Reviews are nice....please? o3o

Reviews

[f**k you]

I agree completely with Lisette. This was quite powerful and so raw. I really felt my heart move with your words, it was enjoyable and intoxicating to read. On another note....DUDE! I know EXACTLY how you feel. Moving on is easier said than done, when the person you try to move on from is like a weight dragging behind you, slowly ripping pieces of yourself away. Breaking apart after its all suposed to be over. Heh...sorry I'm rambling. Great job, LOVE the emotion. Mostly because I feel it too. ;)

-nicole-was-here-

[nono]

I think everyone should move on sometime in there life when something doesn't go exactly how they plan. So good job!

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Awesome ventation that is inspirational to letting go and moving on. I loved the flow and energy within the release and while in honesty I don't really like vulgarity in artwork.. it really works in this piece! I say DO IT if this is from reality.. no one should hold anyone back from happiness. They say people shouldn't burn bridges and you really don't need to, to move on.

The words:

You said I can't move on, you said, You'll never be just a memory..

I could be wrong but this sounds pretty controlling from what I am reading and everyone owns their own mind. Whether real or not.. this was really fiery and I really think many can and will relate to it in some way big or small.