Just the Two of Us

I’d like you in a room

All to myself.

 

I’d like to see you burning

Your skin so red and bright

And you’d itch and cry and scream

Just like I did that night.

 

I’d like to have you up in chains

For everyone to see

A beautiful antiquity

Of these things you did to me.

 

I’d like to see you in the dark

Where the light will never shine

So you can know my pain tenfold,

And the pleasure is all mine.

 

I’d like to see you in the ground

So I’d dream of you no more

See, this is what you get

for making me your w***e.

 

And now I’ve got you

The two of us, today

Don’t worry, I know what I’ll do,

I’ve been thinking of this all day.

 

 

Author's Note

Inspired by Emilie Autumn's "Miss Lucy had some leeches" xD Lemme know what you think~

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think you did a great job on this. I would love to show this poem to one of my enemies then maybe he will stop being mean and show me the respect I deserve. If that doesn't happen then he will get a shock of his life. He will be so scared that he would have to love me. After all he's done to me I think I do deserve revenge like in this poem. I liked the emotions in this poem as well. If someone ever did that to you again you should punch them in the face. Make them bleed because it is not right to make someone there w***e.

[Tina Kline]

Great job on this. Getting revenge for someone doing you very wrongly, I think, would feel very good. I like the strong emotional voice behind this. Very powerful.

[Georgia Gypsy]

I know a few who this applies to!! I've never heard of the inspiration piece...but feel the emotion was very powerful!
sorta of like a tim burton nursery rhyme:P

very good pumpkin;)

[Kanattas Atir Enomo]

wow i really liked this poem. raw and full of emotion. i like the anger behind it and me being the psychopath that i am (XD) found this amusing. it flowed well and the message was clearly conveyed. you did a good job with the rhyming. overall this was nicely written.