Pressure

Everything changes, now 

everything

fades

 

So why don't you?

Why won't you?

 

 

Author's Note

...reviews are nice...

Reviews

[hershey's kiss]

I almost didn't notice the word "fade." hahahaha
like!

[Elizabeth]

Very concise but it sounds like you have a lot to say here. A curious use of font choices too. Whenever I expect someone to change, well, it's hopeless hah. Sadly you can't change anyone but yourself and hope that that's good enough. Nice poem :)

[Georgia Gypsy]

A profound piece,
distilled into
perfected
prose.

[deeps]

I like this, makes one ponder.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

astute use of brevity which enhances the emotional impact~ well done~