My heartless angel

My heartless angel, I must say

You sit by my shoulder everyday

Whispering bad things in my ear

Evil words that feed these fears.

 

My heartless angel, I wish you’d leave

Please, just a little time to grieve.

But I know you’ve never been one to give

So I guess the only thing I can do is live.

You put this black feather on my heart

A darkness surrounds, and I can’t depart.

 

My heartless angel, I know you’re real

But you’ve taken everything, I just can’t feel.

My heartless angel, I wish you’d leave

No more, I don’t want to believe.

Author's Note

i don't know >.< just let me know what you think.

Reviews

[hershey's kiss]

this is lovely, haha if that's an appropriate descriptive word x]
I mean that to say I love the idea, the theme.

[nono]

I like this poem. i think people never think that it's possible there may be suck thing as a heartless angel.

[Tina Kline]

I think this is great. It reads like the dark voice we all have leading us to do things we know we shouldn't, as well as thinking things and so forth. Very nicely done. I enjoyed this a lot.

[Lexi Nicole]

I love the tone and flow of this. This is a really cool poem, great work!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I think it is awesome and something we all deal with on a daily basis...........that evil angel on our shoulder arguing with the good one on the other........some say a devil on one side and an angel on the other. I like to think I have a light and a dark angel on each side myself and the devil is not welcome on either shoulder........:))

[deeps]

I like this I think it is amazing!
A good angel, bad angel thing.
Wonderful rhyming scheme as well.
This is wonderful I like this.