Under the Influence

Under the Influence

A Poem by Marlena
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...of you.

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I’ve never done drugs

But your smile gets me high

I’ve never gotten drunk

But your lips are intoxicating;

Plush vodka and pink wine

I’ve never been one to follow the crowds

But with you, I’ll go wherever you take me

I’ve always been above the influence

But I can’t get out from under you

- And… I don’t think I want to.

© 2010 Marlena


Author's Note

Marlena
Soo...Early this morning I was sitting alone in the lobby at school, dead tired and with a little blue notebook and pen. Note to self- do that more often xD I like how it came out, let me know what you think :3

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I liked this a lot. Thanks for sharing. ;)
I really love the analogies. Hahaha good job

Posted 14 Years Ago



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