His Heart

She presses her lips to his abdomen, feeling his soft skin, the slightly raised scars. The tip of her nose slides across warm flesh, wrinkling as she smiles, he moans but not in ecstasy. His fingers find her hair and tangle there, curling. She raises her eyes to his, he shakes his head and his hand falls from her hair. She keeps her lips there but eases the pressure against him, mumbles something to his skin, secrets to be carried by blood cells, through veins and up his heart. They’d be kept there.

Author's Note

Short, sappy- Like me xD Let me know what you think :3

Reviews

[Tallulah]

I absolutely love this a hundred times over. Its short sweet and easy to read and really enjoyable. LOOOOOOVE ITTTT! last line is my favorite it is oooh so perfect!
Love you!
Tallulah

[April Child]

"mumbles something to his skin, secrets to be carried by blood cells, through veins and up his heart. They’d be kept there."

That is beautiful, sensuous, moving, very nice.

[Becca*Type2012]

Very detailed. Me gusto mucho. :-)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was good. It was awesome actually. I like the details.

[Tracie Skarbo]

This was a great read... I kinda thought it was a piece of flash fiction rather then a poem. Wonderful indeed.

[Sarah]

short and sweet. it was uderly perfect. well done.

[Millionth Muse]

Not sappy at all...sensually beautiful indeed! I love the way that this evokes feelings of emotional sensuality rather than just physical sensuaslity. Beautifully done!

[Bud]

Sappy suits you so well, Aveira. So well, indeed. Brilliant piece. Oh, how I love the portrayal of the blood cells keeping your secrets. That is original, I don't recall ever reading that before? Outstanding.

[Sean M. Addams]

a very nice job on this ... short but great detail in this and thought you well with the sensual tone... nice work!!

[Lexi Nicole]

Awww, this is so cute! Short and simply, but beautifully written. Nice work! ^^

-Howl