Feed (Me And My Darkness)

And there she sits with perfect lips

and blood pumping through those veins

and all the while you watch her and know

It's that demon in you that wants it, wrapped up in chains

despite all strong self will and guarded eyes

you take her down, a single strike

you are your own demise.

 

Dancing in and out of fear

for myself, not anyone or anything else

I know the need to feed is drawing near

and I can't stop myself.

There's darkness lurking in me

suffocating

If I could only be free,

if I could only be free...

I'd have nothing to fear

but it's strong,

God, this is wrong

That need to feed is drawing near.

Why can't I get away from it?

It's so simple, don't you see?

What?

The Darkness inside is you, you'll never be free. 

Author's Note

The title is from an original story I WAS going to finish, it's at like...seventy something pages but I haven't written to it in a while...I'm debating rewriting it, though I have no plot line whatsoever XD We'll see. Either way, this a title from one of the chapters, where one of my characters basically has to choose between doing what he knows is right and doing what he wants, which is bad.

I don't know what made me write this, but I'm happy about it xD Let me know what you think. please?

Reviews

[Jean]

Very descriptive, this paints a beautifully haunting picture. I love it. :)

[tora]

this is very deep.... awesome...i like it it's almost like a long story that make me want to read more. not being bossy but PLEASE MAKE MORE!

[Bud]

I would say that you have a well earned right to be happy. This is a Superb poem. I can imagine that the story is equal or greater from which the this has been inspired by. Keep on being You! : >)

[deeps]

This is so deep, I really like this write. It's quite interesting. I like this alot i think it's quite the powerful write.

[Georgia Gypsy]

Very deep in the way you've written it. Love the way you put the wording of the internal dialogue. Have simialar feelings all the time.
Great job!!

hope you work on the story itself!
think you have something good to work with!:)

keep up the great work Pumpkin!!