Run From You

Lover,

where have you been?

You have gone so far away from me.

Never again, Love, never again.

Lover,

where have I been to?

I have strayed so far away from you

Never again, Love, Never again

will I run from you.  

Reviews

[Georgia Gypsy]

Lovely and eloquently wrote:)
short, to the point,
to put it plainly....

Perfect!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I like it... right to the point with pure sentiment.
Beautifully crafted.

[Dusty]

This seems like it has a story to tell, but is only dialogue right now. It is good, but I wish there were more. This reminds me of a lot of other poems I've read, but you have talent and an eye for a good flow, so maybe it would stand out more if you individualized it a bit.... It is your poem though, either way it is still good. =)

[deeps]

This is simply OUTSTANDING!
You have a magically pen and gifted soul.