I Hate (You)

I Hate (You)

A Poem by Marlena

I hate you

with as much of myself that I have to give

I hate you

all because of what you did.

I hate you

with that stupid smug look on your face

and GOD

the way a thought of you brings my disgrace

I hate you

with all of the rage and anger and fury I have in me

I hate you

the way you can taunt and pull and hurt in ways no one can see

and, s**t, if I could tell you one last thing,

one more thought for you to bring

to hell with you, I don't know, I guess

I'd just have to tell you how much I hate you.

Because I still do, and you won't let me rest.  

© 2009 Marlena


Author's Note

Marlena
It's personal, just let me know what you think. I need to vent :P

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Wow!! Dont hold back! Tell them(who ever it is) exactly what you think!!
and by the way....can i borrow this? I may need to use it to prove my point...;)

And let me say....GREAT JOB!!!



Posted 15 Years Ago


i thought it was really powerful and loud. great combination. you really enforced the fact that you hate that person! ^_^ great job though. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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