So Broken

I’m so broken
And tired of being open
And I just want the day to end
So I can go to a place where reality bends
And I have real friends with actual hearts and ears
And they’ll listen and let me speak and they will hear
All the things I have to say and everything that’s bothering me today
Like how no one gives a s**t about me or the way I feel, except for them
And no one can really see how broken I am, because I’m hiding and lying
But they should see anyway, I’ll say, because they know me there but not today
I keep giving my all and keep slipping, but I don’t fall, because I can’t explain to them why
I can’t explain to them why I fell in the first place.

 

Author's Note

Idk, the first two lines popped into my head and then the rest just followed it XD My muse decided to work with me a little on this, let me know what you think, please?

Reviews

[Bud]

You know, we all know why we write what we do. I'd say you are not hiding anymore or lying. A very honest outpouring of raw emotion. You know my address...
Excellent piece!

[Bud]

You know, we all know why we write what we do. I'd say you are not hiding anymore or lying. A very honest outpouring of raw emotion. You know my address...
Excellent piece!