Again (My Angels)

Quivering lips press to my ear, You tell me what to say, what you want to hear.

Again again again

Fingers curl into my hair

again again again

quivering lips press to my ear

again again again

You tell me what to say, what you want to hear.

Again again again

I won't scream, I won't dream you'll let me go

Again again again

Deeper harder and the pain starts to show

Again again again

It'll end soon, you say

I start to cry, it's only the beginning of the day.

You laugh, pull away,

It's over, it's okay.

 

I see you again, later at night

in an instant, my fear's your delight

a hand over my mouth, you tell me to be quiet,

"Go ahead, I dare you to try it."

I shake my head and kick my legs

my dignity leaves while I start to beg.

 

But it's over before you even have a real chance to begin

I am saved, finally, by them.

I am depressed by an irreversible sin,

however, my Angels will save me again.

Author's Note

A poem based on a dream. Woke up from a nightmare this morning, feel asleep later at night cuz I was exhausted and it....basically picked up where it left off. Comments and crit appreciated, and in the end of the dream it was somewhat of a less nightmarish end, because someone helped me. Again, comments and crit appreciated.

Reviews

[Voice11]

wow. I love it. It doesnt quite use visual as much as something else. The way you use the wording is that so I can just see whats happening. Great poem

[Taylor H]

once again another great poem. Ive read this one before as well. im just all off my game now arent I? lol. great job

[Camelotshadow]

Nice to know even in a chilling nightmare our angels watch over us.

[Surrealstorm]

It is kinda haunting and I can imagine the way it must have felt to wake up after a dream like that. I like how you used dialogue within the poem, it gave it a different, but more realistic feel. There was one spelling mistake "I see you agian" but other than that I thought it was wonderful! GREAT WRITE!

[Georgia Gypsy]

What do you read to cause such dreams?

As I read this i had the feeling of being assaulted against my will, but then getting saved by an entity greater...

I do love your writing, especially when they give me chills
great job! way to go
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[Lexi Nicole]

Ohh, very interesting. Suspenseful and dark with a nice, sort of uplifting ending. Nice work! ^^

-Howl